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Please Modify The Sentences ,Thanks I married with a widow with six children, and I had five children myself by my late wife.(Here use”by” or “from”?) “God bless us” is a right sentence?
1 paź 2018 11:33
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Hi Ember; You change tense a bit here. Is this a current situation or a past situation? You say you married a woman and you "had" 5 children. This indicates that this married occurred in the past. But then you say "God bless us" as if he is blessing you now. I married a widow with six children and I had five children with my late wife. God blessed us. OR I married a widow with six children and I have five children with my late wife. God bless us. (with... you produced the children together). I hope this helps, Stephen
1 października 2018
I suppose you should paraphrase your sentence I married widow and we have eleven children: six were her and five were my own.
1 października 2018
Ember
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