Can I use "Who Was This Man? / Who was this?" in the follow paragraph?
- "Who Was This Man? / Who was this?"
He grew up in poverty in what modern psychologists call a dysfunctional family. His father worked him like a pack mule from sunrise to sunset. He was tall and foolish looking. His clothes were always too tight and small. The other children would mock him and call him “monkey-boy” or “the gorilla.” The following were some of his life experiences:
At the age of 22, he FAILED IN BUSINESS.
At the age of 23, he was DEFEATED IN HIS RUN FOR STATE LEGISLATURE.