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Professional sentence: corporate brand Hi everyone,

Does the following sentence, which will be the webpage title of a new corporate brand, sound professional?

We, Ryo Corporation, have established our new corporate brand

Or, should the title be something simple like this?

Our new corporate brand

Thank you for your time!

Oct 11, 2018 2:55 AM
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Let me add that a web page title doesnt usually have a full sentence but rather just a few word phrase.
October 11, 2018
It sounds professional but its more common to say one of the following "We at Ryo Corporation Etc" Or At Ryo Corporation, we Etc"
October 11, 2018
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