rephrasing a sentnce Can I rephrase the following context like "Protest groups also appreciate the view on war that photography provides and rely on this medium to justify their objections to war"? Context: Protest groups also rely on photography to justify their objections to war, while appreciating the view on war that the medium provides.
Oct 16, 2018 7:40 AM
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You can rewrite it by changing the order, but it is stylistically less pleasing.
October 17, 2018
Chris Tooze, The original sentence is from a book. In my rephrasing I have removed the key word "while" and have changed the order of the two main parts.
October 16, 2018
Did you write the original sentence?
October 16, 2018
Yup, sounds good to me. Since the only thing you've done is just switch up the order.
October 16, 2018
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