Keira
Please put my grammar right , thinks a lot! Due to Japanese headquarters requested XXX to close all issues in the end of October. These issues are planned to closed asap. Please refer to these data as below. reports has been sent in yellow. Would you update them or comments to us?
Oct 16, 2018 3:40 PM
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Laurence has given you a good version. I wondered if when you say "issues" you might be talking about a service request or helpdesk request. In the U.S. we would say "incident" in that case. We might also use the word "ticket" if the request or incident is entered in helpdesk software that tracks each issue separately. "Headquarters has requested that all incidents be closed by the end of October." "Headquarters has requested that all tickets be closed by the end of October."
October 17, 2018
Due to Japanese headquarters requested XXX to close all issues in the end of October. Headquarters in Japan had deemed all issues are to be closed by the end of October. These issues are planned to closed asap. These issues are to be closed asap. Please refer to these data as below. reports has been sent in yellow. ..... The reports are highlighted in yellow Would you update them or comments to us? Would you update them or provide more comments? 最好有一份中文版, 可以正确來助你 :)
October 16, 2018
The Japanese headquarters have requested XXX to close all accounts by the the end of October. These accounts are planned to be closed asap. Please refer to the data as below. Reports have been sent in yellow. Would you update them or send comments to us. Not sure what you mean here by "issues" so I have suggested accounts, matters or even departments depending on the context.
October 16, 2018
Due to Japanese headquarters requested XXX to close all issues in the end of October. Due to the Japanese HQ having requested that XXX should close all issues by the end of October, These issues are planned to closed asap. these issues shall be closed asap. Please refer to these data as below. Please refer to the data below. reports has been sent in yellow. The Reports have been sent in yellow (or marked up in yellow? Not sure what you mean). Would you update them or comments to us? Please update or pass on any comments.
October 16, 2018
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Keira
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