How to correct this sentence? Although this phenomenon was a tradition in ancient times, it isn't a good choice.
Nov 6, 2018 1:55 AM
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It's OK as it is. Ideally it wants something more, to explain why it isn't any more.
November 6, 2018
As Gary said, there must be reason it is no longer a good choice. The phenomenon, or practice, performed in ancient times, may have been unsafe, or inappropriate by today's standards, therefore it would be a bad idea to continue doing it.
November 6, 2018
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