can anyone who is native English speaker check this text please? hey Guys, i am working on a text for the homepage of our family business - it is about beauty and spa services, but i am not sure if everything is written properly, in a grammatically and stylistically correct way..? would be great if the whole thing could sound natural, nativelike. Can you please help me check it and comment is something sounds weird or just incorrect? In particular those who are native English speakers, please :) I would be more than greateful for your help :) Manicure Treatments Did you know, that hands are one of the first spots to reveal your age? They are exposed to dust and harmful skin aging UV rays on a daily basis. Weather, water, chemicals and household chores also affect their appearance, and as a result they age faster than other areas of the body. Our professional manicure treatments can give your hands the TLC they deserve, leaving your skin smooth and your nails strong and perfectly shaped. Benefits of Professional Manicures • naturally stronger nails • perfectly manicured hands up to 3-4 weeks • after the treatment your skin feels silky smooth • your hands will look younger and healthier • manicure is not just about filing and shaping your nails: a hand massage helps to improve blood circulation and the mobility of the joints • you can choose from a wide variety of colours, shapes and styles. Our technicians will help you find the one that suits your personality and lifestyle best Besides the traditional manicure that comes with a regular polish and a top coat, there are a multitude of different methods you can choose to achieve your dream look, including nail extension tips, acrylic overlay, gel or Shellac. Acrylic or gel manicures also keep fragile nails from breaking, allowing weaker, brittle nails to grow to unexpected lengths. If you opt for a more natural look, gel polish is the perfect choice for you: gel manicure is gentle to the natural nail and the lightweight polish stays intact on the nail for at least a couple of weeks without cracking, peeling or chipping. Even those can wear it who were previously advised not to wear artificial nails. Our manicures, pedicures, gel polishes and nail enhancements are performed by our highly skilled nail technicians, who are dedicated to providing you with a first-class service every single time. During our treatments we always use the finest brands and highest-quality products, ensuring that the result is flawless and lasts up to 3 or 4 for weeks with no damage.
Jun 17, 2019 1:54 PM
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It is very good. There is one awkward sentence: Even those can wear it who were previously advised not to wear artificial nails. This would be better if it read: Even those who were previously advised not to wear artificial nails can wear this treatment.
June 17, 2019
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