saeiiiid
Is this well-formes, Hello dear native speakers Is the following sentence natural and well-formed Shiraz is an ancient city, which is located in southern part of Iran, and it seems thar its beauty has an almost magical quality. Thanks
Jun 19, 2019 8:18 AM
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Hi Saeiiid, Shiraz is an ancient city, which is located in southern part of Iran and it seems that its beauty has an almost magical quality. Afarin!
June 19, 2019
Shiraz is an ancient city which is located in the southern part of Iran. It seems that its beauty has an almost magical quality. Don't use a comma before 'which'. Limit your sentences to one or two ideas. You may also say it like this: Shiraz, an ancient city located in southern Iran, seems to have an almost magical beauty .
June 20, 2019
No, you don't need to add 'to it' at the end.
June 19, 2019
Thanks Do I need to add "to it" to the end od the sentence?
June 19, 2019
One small correction: Shiraz is an ancient city which is located in *the* southern part of Iran. It seems that its beauty has an almost magical quality to it. It's great. It sounds quite natural.
June 19, 2019
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