Does this sound natural?
I’ve been eating a lot recently. It seems that I have a good appetite which leads to weigh gain. If I were to shed my pounds, I would do weight training rather than go on a diet.
I would perhaps change this sentence
** If I were to shed my pounds,**
to:
If I wanted to shed my pounds, (or weight)
or
If I wanted to lose some weight,
June 20, 2019
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I’ve been eating a lot recently. It seems that I have a good appetite, which leads to weight gain. If I wanted to shed pounds, I would do weight training rather than go on a diet.
June 20, 2019
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Chinese (Mandarin), Chinese (Taiwanese), English, Japanese