World choice Hi Am I using the word "resources" correctly? How about the whole sentence? Based on the fact that the population of the world is increasing, there will be a rising demand for various energy resources. Thanks
Jun 22, 2019 12:18 PM
Answers · 4
You used the word resources correctly. The whole sentence is a bit wordy. I would have started the sentence with “Because the population . . . “.
June 22, 2019
As Stuart has mentioned above, the sentence totally works, but its quite lengthy. I would consider trimming it down a bit, something more along the lines of, "As the population of the world increases, so does the demand for various energy resources."
June 22, 2019
Yes, this all reads fine to me :)
June 22, 2019
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