Hi! Could anyone please check this text for me? Hi Guys, Still the same translation..yeah... could anyone who is a native speaker check this text, if it sounds natural? thank you so much :) Lymphatic body massage Lymph Drainage Massage (LDT) features light, slow strokes toward the heart to increase the flow of lymph and reduce toxins in your body. Opening up the lymphatic pathways, LDT helps remove harmful substances, waste and toxins from the tissues, increases immune function and helps reduce water retention which may cause your legs and feet to swell. Benefits of Lymph Drainage Massage • supports lymph flow • helps to detox your body and get rid of wastes and toxins • it can improve the function of the immune system • helps reduce swelling • helps relieve migraine symptoms You will need this type of massage if.. This treatment is recommended for those who lead a sedentary lifestyle. Manual lymphatic massage is also useful when the body is healing after physical trauma, e.g. surgery or strains, sprains and muscle tear, as it helps reduce puffiness and swelling. Manual lymphatic drainage can be used in the treatment of lymphoedema for patients who have been treated for cancer (e.g. lymph node removal.) How long is the treatment? 30, 60 or 90 minutes, and it includes a lymph massage on the face as well. Schedule an appointment with one of our many specialists.
Jun 26, 2019 8:50 AM
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Text is overall excellent. Only small comments: 1. "e.g. surgery or strains, sprains and muscle tear" - I would put this in brackets, because the sentence continues afterwards, and so reads easier. 2. "...and it includes a lymph massage on the face as well." "on the face" doesn't sound right, better "for the face" Difficult to say why, this is just my feel.
June 26, 2019
You should post this in the "Notebook" section, not here in "Answers". In Notebook it is easier for people to correct text.
June 26, 2019
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