Do you think "He the shot dead" is a good title for a book about a male zombie?
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I've stolen the idea from Ayn Rand's We the living
Does it make sense grammatically?

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Do you think "He the shot dead" is a good title for a book about a male zombie?
Thanks

Upd:
I've stolen the idea from Ayn Rand's We the living
Does it make sense grammatically?

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Grammar-wise, it's incoherent. I don't know if "he" shot somebody or was shot (the inclusion of "the" doesn't makes sense).

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To be honest I really like it :) good luck with your novel