Thanks very much bill for your feedback !

Your dialogue is easy to understand except it took me some time to realise you were talking about Sri Lanka. At a level below the Sri Lanka problem I was uncertain about "bloodshed", "this" or "these". The "th" sound in English is always hard for people to pick up but followed by "is" or "ese" requires special effort. Have a look on youtube for English people teaching "th" sound and work on it. Everything else is less important now. Well done.