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Please help to correct my sentence As per discussion with John, we have revised the memo and add information about machineries and list of contractors for construction the Hotel in Bangkok
Aug 10, 2019 12:06 AM
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As per the discussion with John, we have revised the memo and added the information about the machinery and list of contractors for the hotel construction in Bangkok. Note: Machinery is uncountable and has no plural form.
August 10, 2019
For corrections, I think it'd be better if you used the notebook session of this site, but since you've already posted it here, then I made a few improvements to your sentence, I hope it helps. As was discussed with John, we have revised the memo and added the information about machineries and a list of contractors for the construction of the Hotel in Bangkok.
August 10, 2019
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