Can you fix my writings of grammatical and expressional mistake?
Through seeing transitions of the number of Japanese learners, It could be assumed that the advance of Japanese language education is strongly related to the guideline of government. Although the number of Japanese immigrants gradually getting increased in Australia, It doesn't seem to be enough that the numbers of platforms for learning"Japanese as a Heritage Language" for kids. "Heritage language" is crucial for kids, who primarily has some of the backgrounds in diverse, to be one factor in helping to develop their identity. (Uchiyama, 2017) However, it can be easily get harmed by another factor, it is so fragile. Eventually, it leads to being a factor harmfully such as self-defeated. (Nakajima, 2003)