Does this text sound fine to you?
This time i am writing about liposuction - an exciting topic, isn't it?
I got involved in some complicated sentences, and I am not sure if they sound natural, or if they grammatically correct at all..?
It would be cool, if someone could check them for me.
thanks for you help!! :)
"After the surgery you will have to wear a special pressure garment for between 4 and 6 weeks. Wearing a compression garment is important because it helps the healing process. It keeps swelling down and helps to keep the circulation in your body going smoothly. You will need to wear the compression garment continuously for 5 days until you can first take it off when you take a shower. Your shower should be short, and the wound, that should be covered with an adhesive bandage, shouldn't be exposed to water."