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Suhaib
Can anyone correct these two conversation? A:would you like to go swimming on Friday, Sep 14, from 2:00 to 5:00 P.M.? B: I'd like to, but I can't. My body is allergic to water. It causes dermatophyte to raise on my skin as well as I have waterphobia. C: would you like to watch the horror movie together in the cinema on Sunday, October ninth? D: I'd like to, but I can't. When I watch suck kind of movie, I can't sleep at night. It causes nightmares and night terror to me.
Sep 1, 2019 2:23 PM
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A:would you like to go swimming on Friday, Sep 14, from 2:00 to 5:00 P.M.? B: I'd like to, but I can't. My body is allergic to water. It causes dermatophytes on my skin. I'm also waterphobic. (not much to correct here. I split the last sentence in two because I think it works better) C: would you like to watch the horror movie together in the cinema on Sunday, October ninth? (not bad - "with me" works slightly better) D: I'd like to, but I can't. When I watch horror movies, I can't sleep at night. It causes nightmares and night terror to me. Not bad... not many corrections here. Well done. P.S. All these sentences were understood, which is the important thing :)
September 1, 2019
Both are correct! :)
September 1, 2019
Suhaib
Language Skills
Arabic, English
Learning Language
English