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Does this sound natural?
"His coincidence and her intention makes the two people who are unlikely to be together be together."
Is above sentence sound natural? A little bit of context : two people who are not supposed to love each other turn out they ended up together.
Thank you.
Sep 6, 2019 11:39 AM
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Yes it does sound natural, just instead of using “are” use ‘were”, “...who were unlikely to be together, be together.”. :)
September 6, 2019
Natural
September 6, 2019
His coincidence and her intention made the two people who were unlikely to be together, be together.
September 6, 2019
No, I recommend the following:
His timing and her intent brought the unlikely couple together.
September 6, 2019
