Majid, this is a beautiful prayer. It is personal to you, but I can offer another version with more natural wording.
God, I take refuge in you so that I will not appear good to others, but internally ugly to you. I keep the things you know about me from the people’s eyes. I show my nice face to them, but bring you my ugly deeds. I bring myself closer to your servants and further away from your satisfaction.
I hope this is helpful! I’m praying that God will reveal himself to you and bless you in the Truth. Amen