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1. Dear Terry,
How is everything going? I’m glad to hear from you. Learning that you want to know about Chinese customs, I’m writing to tell you about it.
First of all, you need to be polite and modest. That’ll make(换成help更好) you get along better with people. Secondly, you have to respect people. For example, at the table, you must wait for the host to eat before you eat. Besides, you should eat all food in the bowl, it means the food is delicious. Following these rules will make you happy.
I’d be happy if you come to China. I’m looking forward to playing （play with sb.）with you.
That’s all. Best wishes.you