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In general, this is clear and well written. I would recommend using plurals to speak about the methods of transportation in most cases.
It can be clearly seen that in 1996, the bus made up --> It can be clearly seen that in 1996, busses made up
However, in 2020, bicycle was used less --> However, in 2020, bicycles were used less
Also when speaking about the future be careful which tense you use. Two issues I noticed:
1. this figure will increase to 13% in 2020. ---> This figure is expected to increase to 13% in 2020
We cannot say "will" because "will" indicates certainty.
2. Car was expected to rise dramatically from 15% in 1996 to 52% in 2020. ---> The use of cars has risen dramatically since 1996 and is expected to rise to 52% in 2020. (This is one suggestion)
Be specific, in this sentence "in 1996, the highest rate belonged to the bus" we need to know the "highest rate" of what?
Careful with comparisons: "However, in 2020, bicycle was used less than that of 1996." Should be " bicycles were used less than in 1996." OR "The rate of bicycle use was less that of 1996." However the first sounds better in my opinion.
Also, next time it would be helpful if you can include a link to the chart being referenced.
Let me know if you have any other questions! Good work!