Is this word inversion acceptable?
Hi everyone. I was drafting a couple of sentences in order to test (via trail and error) the flexibility of word order in English. I started off by reading this brief excerpt from Walter de la Mare's "Arabia":
"Far are the shades of Arabia,
Where the Princes ride at noon"
and by following (as far as I'm concerned) the structure of its first sentence, I came up with this other one:
"Unreachable seem those days when we were happy"
Would you tell me to which extent it is understandable, or acceptable for a native speaker?
Thanks a lot!