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Science plays a notorious role in our current society and will be more and more transcendent in a near future, that is why is really important to encourage young people to focus on this discipline, since human well being tend to increase proportionally as the science takes steps forward by inventing new devices which make our lives easier.
To start with I must admit advertising is one of the most powerful tools which can be used to achieve this encouragement. However nowadays TV or other means of communication unfortunately pay more attention to famous people in regards music, sports or others taking part in reality shows instead of showing for instance ongoing scientific research projects in detail which could suppose a huge impact changing our vision of the current world.
On the other hand, education can influence drastically in this matter. School programmes should change their approach while teaching science in order to keep young people interested and motivated. One of the shortcomings presented is due to the lack of practical knowledge is involved in. By using the theory into real situations would allow pupils to keep intrigued and develop their knowledge in a natural way, and not just as an obligation. On top of that, providing schools with the same number of laboratories as classrooms would be a critical factor to make all this possible.
As far as I am concerned, the best way to make youngsters interested in science would be by stimulating them to solve problems on a daily basis with scientific tools, in that way, they will be aware indirectly of its power. Therefore, the most effective way in my opinion to achieve that would be by developing practical methods in schools at early ages which increase science popularity.