Hi. I need help. Is my sentences below is correct? English is my 4th languages. TQ
So I want to write to my club community in game. But I'm not sure if my sentences below are correct. I want them to be shorter and sound more natural.
“ Thanks for those who participate in war. I thought we gonna lose in war this time. Because as I look at our enemies city, some of them own the biggest war card attack such as B Movie (damage-1000) & etc. Maybe we eventually will lose since our team own the lower war card than our enemies. But if we really focus to produce and get the war items from the war deliveries of course we will win. This is why I need you all to participate & contribute points in war at least aim for personal rewards to get platinum (but better aim for gold reward) so that your war card will be upgraded to be better.”
Note to reader here: I don't have much space left, could you please rephrase my sentences above, fix any mistakes or make it shorter? Copy the whole sentences and edit it back. Thank you!! Much appreciate!!