simba0722
Does this sound natural? 1. Besides (including) looking extremely good, she has a great chracter and she will make herself a good wife for him I soppose. 2. She not only is looking extremely good but also has a great character, so I soppose she will make herself a good wife for him.
Sep 30, 2019 7:16 AM
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I suppose she will be a good wife for him. She’s extremely good-looking and has a great character, too.
September 30, 2019
I appreciate your corrections. Thank you.
September 30, 2019
1. It's not completely unnatural, but it'd be better phrased like this: In addition to looking extremely good, she has a great character and I suppose she will make for a good wife for him. Besides didn't really match the intended meaning thus the change. Also subject in english sounds monst natural when it's at the beginning! ( That's why the "I suppose" change) 2. Besided mistakes from above, there should be "she looks". When talking about someone's appearance, present continuous isn't used- She LOOKS extremely good.
September 30, 2019
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