Hi, Firstly, as N said, we would need context to understand what you are talking about. e.g. Is war referring to a campaign, or the name of a game? Just that one thing makes a big difference, and you have mixed up using capitals and not, which makes it less clear.
Secondly, since this is a big piece of text, you should post it in the 'notebook' section of this website instead. I think there are less limitations on text size, and there are much better tools to enable people to highlight the corrections they have made.