Please correct the sentence below
It is indeed the efforts of the manufactures to produce a car which consumers will like that lead such great progress in Japan's car industries in recent years.
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Suggestion:
It is indeed the manufacturers' efforts to produce a car which consumers would like that led to such great progress in Japan's car industry in recent years.
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Martha
October 10, 2019
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Why use 'industries' rather than 'industry'? What are the different ones you are thinking of?
October 10, 2019
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manufacturers ?
correct for what?
grammar?
ease of reading?
October 10, 2019
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I need some further clarification. By the use of the word 'indeed', I assume you have previously spoken of those efforts. 'Lead' is in the past tense, is it not? I will need to change the wording, not because it is wrong, but it is confusing.
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