momo
Please correct the sentence below It is indeed the efforts of the manufactures to produce a car which consumers will like that lead such great progress in Japan's car industries in recent years. Pleeeeeeeease:)))))
Oct 10, 2019 7:06 AM
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Suggestion: It is indeed the manufacturers' efforts to produce a car which consumers would like that led to such great progress in Japan's car industry in recent years. Hope that helps! Martha
October 10, 2019
Why use 'industries' rather than 'industry'? What are the different ones you are thinking of?
October 10, 2019
manufacturers ? correct for what? grammar? ease of reading?
October 10, 2019
I need some further clarification. By the use of the word 'indeed', I assume you have previously spoken of those efforts. 'Lead' is in the past tense, is it not? I will need to change the wording, not because it is wrong, but it is confusing.
October 10, 2019
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