Pei Yung
Are these sentences correct? (1) I like to get along with approachable people cause I have difficulty breaking the ice or thinking of what topic to talk. (2) Developing countries such as Vietnam are known for labour-intensive industries. (3) For many developed countries, how to dispose of the waste created by well-developed technology is a burning issue. (4) For me, blueberries and raspberries are two of a kind. I can not tell them apart when I eat them. (5) Plastic bags are hard to be degraded over time. To do good the the earth, bring your own bag from now on. (6) Although sheep are cute, be careful of sheep pellets here and there. (7) It is ridiculous to outlaw the abortion because of the religion reason. (8) Antisocial tendencies can be detected at early age if only parents pay more attention to their children.
Oct 16, 2019 1:51 PM
Answers · 2
I would say: 1. I tend to have a hard time finding things to talk about with people I don't know, so I like spending time with outgoing people because they can break the ice and keep conversations going. 2. this one is ok :) 3. For many developed countries, the problem of how to dispose of the large amounts of waste created by companies and individuals is a burning issue. 4. To me, blueberries and raspberries taste pretty much the same. I can't tell them apart when I eat them. 5. Plastic bags are not biodegradable and thus are harsh on the environment. If you want to be more sustainable, you should bring your own bag whenever possible. 6. This sentence is odd.... and not too clear as to what you are saying. Pellets can be either food, a bedding material for animals, or poop given the context. So for example, you could say: Although the sheep here are cute, you have to be careful not to step in any sheep pellets while walking around to pet them. 7. It is ridiculous to outlaw abortion due to religious reasons. 8. Antisocial tendencies can be detected at an early age if parents pay attention to early indicators in their children. These are just my suggestions. Hope this helps :)
October 16, 2019
oops accidentally made it a comment. moved it to answer :P
October 16, 2019
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Pei Yung
Language Skills
Chinese (Mandarin), Chinese (Taiwanese), English, Japanese
Learning Language
English, Japanese