It is pretty good, just two mistakes about 还,the frist 还 should be replaced with 就. 还 is used in a different situation. like the word “yet”. 还 express a turning point,so the two 还 in your passage is wrong. 😊
October 29, 2019
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"那你还是一个幸福的人吧。"可以改成:"那你就是一个幸福的人。"
October 25, 2019
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