Khaled Bassam
Can anyone check those two statements? Here in Jordan we are totally unlike Canada in terms of the percent for those who share housework with their wife. We have lower percent here.
Oct 29, 2019 9:37 PM
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Check? Changes arerequired. Suggestions: Here in Jordan we are quite unlike Canada in terms of the percent of those men who share housework with their wife. We have a lower percent here. . By the way your sentence structure shows a bias. Why is it sharing with your wife, rather than simply sharing. The built-in assumption is that the work belongs to the wife.
October 30, 2019
Thanks samee. That's so helpful my friend
October 29, 2019
Unlike Canada, here in Jordan we are different in terms of the percentage of men who share the housework with their wives. The percentage is much lower here. Added some context
October 29, 2019
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