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Could you help me to correct this English writting,Thank you! Dear sir or Madam, I am a customer who has lived in your hotel last week. I am writing the letter for the purpose of telling you what I have experienced and give you some advice to improve the service. It ,to begin with, seems my argument that the room is not only without a television but also without a computer , I often wath TV at 7 o'lock every evening .I think the TV and computer are the basis appliances, more importantly the worse are the bad manner of steward and Stewardness who are reluctant to answer your questions about the hetel.I do want to share some advice for the hotel service with you. you should add more infrastractions te appeal more customers . The Stewardl and stewardness should accept trains every week to improve their service. I would appreciate your taking my advice consderation. Hope you can take meassures to improve your hotel.I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Nov 16, 2019 2:35 PM
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Dear sir or madam, I am a customer who has visited your hotel last week. I'm writing this letter to tell you about my experience and to hopefully get you to change a few things. To begin with, it seems that my room did not have a TV or a computer, and I often watch TV at 7 every evening. I would assume that a TV and a computer are basic appliances, and the rude steward and stewardess who are reluctant to answer your questions didn't make my experience more enjoyable. One thing that I would love to see changed is the infrastructure of the hotel to appeal to the customers. Also, the stewardess and steward should receive weekly training to improve their service. I would greatly appreciate you taking my advice into consideration, and I hope you can take measures to improve your hotel. I look forward to hearing from you soon. I hope this helps!!
November 16, 2019
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Chinese (Mandarin), English
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English