Could you check my translation into English please? Does it sound natural?
The main Apple event - annual autumn new iPhone showcase has just finished.
In magnificent Steve Jobs Theater several new Apple smartphones and some other new products were presented.
Almost everything was known about new iPhone in advance. The biggest intrigue of the evening was the names of new iPhone models.
The event started with animation commercial which presented all Apple high-tech gadgets and services.
After that Tim Cook showed up on the stage and began the presentation with common statistics and praise about the company.