Please check my short Japanese paragraph translation! Thank you!
Journal with penpal's translation: <He's learning English>
I went to the baseball practice today.
It was after a day’s work practice. I’m so tired.
However, I enjoyed it in batting practice is a very good ball flew.
For the next game, I would like to practice again＾＾
Today, I went to baseball practice.
Because the practice was after a day's work, I am very tired.
I enjoyed batting practice because I hit the ball well. (??)
For the next game, I want to practice again.
Thank you so much!