Beats me. Practice, they say. here are some comments that may be completely wrong or ignored.
I want to eliminate all of my Chinglish mistakes. I want to know how to reach this point.
It seems common for Chinese to use "," or "...." to connect sentences. In English I see we just use full stops between sentences. (Full stop followed by a space)
Different people will tell you different things. When starting university, they said write short, simple sentences. I suspect it is good advice.
I give "English" a capital letter. I suspect "Chinglish" should also have one.
Maybe this sentence is in Chinglish as well.
Maybe this sentence is Chinglish as well.
Not sure I can handle "a Chinglish" as a noun for a sentence in Chinglish.
Your English is obviously good. Practice will make it easier & easier to think in English sentence structures.