Ann Lex
Can you correct my mistakes? Again. Please!!! Nowadays there are many different hobbies: fishing, hunting, dancing, music, collecting, computer, etc. Music and dancing is most ancient of entertainment . Through songs and dances the ancient people made rites and hyperthermia. Now dances and songs are only for entertainment. Of antiquity come to us of activities such as fishing and hunting, but before fishing and hunting only served to extract food. Nowadays it is just fun, to do this can anyone who has a fishing rod or a gun. Development of new technologies has led to new types of hobbies, such as computer games. but despite this, yet well developed sports: sports equipment becomes available, as more and more people love sports. Another kind of hobby is collecting. Since ancient times people collect different things: stamps, corks, labels and many other things. I personally do not like doing it, but my dad collects stamps. I believe that everyone chooses a hobby to his liking. For example, I love music, and my friends sport. and it's wonderful
Jun 13, 2010 2:33 PM
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Nowadays there are many different hobbies: fishing, hunting, dancing, music, collecting, computering, etc. Music and dance are the most ancient types of entertainment . Through songs and dances the ancient people made rites and (hyperthermia?? sorry I don't understand). Today dances and songs are only for entertainment, in partys and in cultural shows. Activities such as fishing and hunting, are old traditions who come from long time, but before fishing and hunting next application was food extracting. Nowadays it is just for fun, this activitys can be made by anyone who has a fishing rod or a gun. The development of new technologies has propelled new types of hobbies, such as computer games, a very extended hobby. But despite of this,well developed sports are practised yet: sports equipment have becomed available, making that more and more people love sports. Another kind of hobby is collecting. Since ancient times people collectes different things: stamps, corks, labels and many other things. Personally, I do not like doing it, but my dad collects stamps. I believe that each one chooses a hobby according to his liking. For example, I love music, and my friends sport. We have different hobbies howevwr we gwt along. And I think this variety it's wonderful! A native would make it better. I hope helped you.
June 13, 2010
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