This is a song that i wrote, would you please correct it for me ^^
( I'm Mine )
Time after time i became n't like me
As i've lost too much of me, as became your slave
& whatever i do you always keep to blame
You always find me mistaken, fine me misbehave
I've got tired more than what that i can tell,
As i've left all my desires seeking for your will
Now i'm done with all your orders & controls
I'll figure out some way to save what's left of me
No, i won't take it anymore
& someday you'll find me gone
& then you should n't ask for rewind
'cause when i would go, i won't look behind
Freedom would be mine,
Yes my freedom will be mine
For so long i've lost that feeling to be in control
I will gain my soul back,
Gain my love back,
Gain all my life
No i won't be yours, i will be mine
I'm n't saying you're n't good
I'm n't saying i hate you
But your love is n't enough to make me stay around
Your words are so painful,
Are so hurtful,
Push me out the door
And now i'm n't yours,
'cause i'm Mine.