julie
i need to do event page on facebook for anniversary day of cafe i don't know how to start or what to say... there's a details it's gonna be at the first of may a lot of entertainment , rock band, stand up comedian, beat boxer, flamer , and DJ also there will be gifts distribute to the " audience , clients .. i dont know the right word " About what am thinking first of all i wanna announce about the event without mention what the entertainment and activities gonna be... i want them to stay tuned and make some suspense by mention that there's will be a lot of activites, entertainment stuff and surprises and after few days i will announce what we r preparing for so guys any help how to start and write this invitation or announcement in glamour way :))
Apr 15, 2011 1:39 PM
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No problem, anytime :)
April 17, 2011
You can follow Julie's suggestions. Then if 'Events" is not in your list of applications, try searching for it (just search "Events" on the top search bar, and go to the applications tab). Also, here's a direct link to the app: http://www.facebook.com/apps/application.php?id=2344061033
April 17, 2011
thank you soooo much kristen :) i really appreciate ur help .
April 15, 2011
What you have is great...I made a few minor grammatical corrections to help you out..and my suggestion for wrapping it up. Hope it helps. :) We did it! We have been open for one year and we couldn't have done it without YOU ! " name of the cafe " cafe proudly invites you to celebrate it's first anniversary on the first of May. This will be an amazing night with many surprises and plenty of entertainment! The most talented band in Jordan, GAZDARA! and "his name" one of the best beatboxers in the buisiness, will be there to rock the night in style! Don't miss it, this is a night you won't forget! Bring your family and friends and lets celebrate this great day together!
April 15, 2011
thx Dina what do u think of this ? We did it. We have been open for one year and we couldn't of done it without YOU " name of the cafe " cafe proudly would like to invites you to celebrate their first anniversary day in the first of May An amazing night will be waiting for you with a lot of Surprises and entertainments. The greatest talented band in Jordan GAZDARA! our best beatboxer " his name " also i want to write a glamor conclusion ur suggestions guys
April 15, 2011
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