Khaled Bassam
Could someone help me with correcting this paragraph? I and my friends had planned to visit  southern Jordan in the summer. We rented a car for three days. We headed into south by dawn. We had planned to visit a lake on our route which is called "prides lake". People say 'the story behind this name is that prides in the past used to wash and take shower at this lake'. This lake is formed by rain in winter. When we visited it, we found it dried. So, we kept going. Then, we had breakfast at a place has stunning view on Tiberias lake. We struggled with the car during the trip because the engine heat kept rising.
Oct 20, 2020 12:06 PM
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Could someone help me with correcting this paragraph? My friends and I had planned to visit southern Jordan in the summer. We rented a car for three days. We headed into south by dawn. We had planned to visit a lake on our route which is called "prides lake". People say 'the story behind this name is that prides in the past used to wash and take shower at this lake'. This lake is formed by rain in winter. When we visited it, we found it had dried up. So, we kept going. Then, we had breakfast at a place which has a stunning view of Tiberias lake. We struggled with the car during the trip because the engine heat kept rising.
October 20, 2020
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Khaled Bassam
Language Skills
Arabic, English
Learning Language
English