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Untitled - XII She was in that relationship for seven years, but after June she decided to broke up with her boyfriend and forgive her past life. Knowing herself and take a break from everyone was one of the first steps to not freak out. I can claim without a doubt that she was honest and faithful to him, trying to keep it up as good as she could. Due her private way of living, some people think she is as strong as a rock, but little thing they know, it is just her armour, not herself; she hides her struggling and pains, but her unhappy face does not hide anything. But as time passes, the wounds were being cured, although new wounds always come about. How long does it take to finish this kind of loops?
Oct 21, 2021 4:51 AM
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Untitled - XII She was in that relationship for seven years, but after June she decided to broke up with her boyfriend and forgave her past life. Knowing herself and taking a break from everyone were the first steps to not freaking out. I can claim without a doubt that she was honest and faithful to him, trying to kept it up as good as she could. Due to her private way of life, some people think that she is as strong as a rock, but little thing they know, it is just her armour, not herself; she hides her struggles and pains, but her unhappy facial expression cannot hide anything. But as time passes by, the wounds have been healed, although the new wounds always come. How long does it take to end this vicious circle?
Hi Rafaela, your grammars are already good, you just need to pay attention to the tenses, dictions, and verb conjugations. Keep up the good work 👍
October 21, 2021
Untitled - XII She was in that relationship for seven years, but after June she decided to brake up with her boyfriend and forgive herself for past life (if you meant forgiving yourself, if you meant forgetting they you would say [...] and forget her past life). Getting to know herself and taking a break from everyone was one of the first steps in order not to freak out (or in order to say peaceful). I can claim without a doubt that she was honest and faithful to him, trying to keep it up as good as she could. Due to her private way of living, some people think she is as strong as a rock, but little do they know, it is just her armour, not herself; she hides her struggling and pains, but her unhappy face does not hide anything. But as time passes, the wounds were being cured, although new wounds always come about. How long does it take to finish this kind of loops? Very nice writting and nice message for everyone. Getting to know yourself is the true wisdom. All the best! :-)
October 21, 2021
Untitled - XII She was in that relationship for seven years, but after June, she decided to break up with her boyfriend and forgive her past life. Knowing herself, taking a break from everyone was one of the first steps to not freak out. I can claim without a doubt that she was honest and faithful to him, trying to keep it up as good as she could. Due to her private way of living, some people think she is as strong as a rock, but little do they know, it is just her armour, not herself. She hides her struggles and pain, but her unhappy face does not hide anything. But as time passes, the wounds were being cured, although new wounds always come about. How long does it take to finish this kind of loop? Very well written. I hope my corrections help. All the best
October 21, 2021
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