Chiara Mathou
In Paris in France there are a lot of monuments to visit In first you should climb on the famous eiffel tower In second you can visit the « sacré coeur », it’s very beautiful and the story of this cathedral is really interresting After, you can go to the Frensh Academy (it’s an old building but it’s amazing) You should visit the Garnier Opera (if you have read the ghost of the opera, it’s better !) There are also a lot of beautiful cemereries in paris If you need to do shopping, go to the Lafayette Galeries (even it’s depensive) Near Paris, you can visit the castle of Versailles (it was the castle of the king Louis XIV) Have a nice trip ! XOXO
Sep 18, 2021 12:46 PM
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There are a lot of monuments to visit in Paris, France. First, you should climb the famous Eiffel Tower. Second, I recommend you visit the "Sacré Coeur". It’s very beautiful and the story of this cathedral is really interesting. After that, you can go to the French Academy. It’s an old building but it’s amazing. You should also visit the Garnier Opera. If you have read The Phantom of the Opera, it’s better. There are also a lot of beautiful cemeteries in Paris. If you need to do any shopping, go to the Lafayette Galeries (even if it’s expensive). Near Paris, you can visit The Palace of Versailles. It was the palace of King Louis XIV. Have a nice trip! XOXO
Don't forget to use punctuation like periods (.) at the end of your sentences. Also, in English, we don't call it the 'castle' of Versailles, but The 'Palace' of Versailles. Proper names like those of kings and queens, special landmarks or statues, and many others require uppercase letters.
Sep 18, 2021 12:58 PM
The ascent (not the climb) of the Eiffel Tower is a must to enjoy the magnificent view of Paris.
Paris 😍. The “City of Love” is known all across the globe, and holds prime spot on the bucket list of many travelers, including my own. Paris is also known for its student life, lively atmosphere and bistros. Paris has something for any one (not anyone).
Sep 18, 2021 1:08 PM
Wow, this is good. With more practice, you can be more fluent. Break a leg and have a great day.
Sep 23, 2021 11:51 AM
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Chiara Mathou
Language Skills
English, French
Learning Language
English