Jacy
Please help me correct. There are four seasons in Taiwan — spring, summer, autumn and winter. Each season has its own character so people can feel it obviously. To me, I love autumn the most. It’s chilly and cozy to wander around, and September happens to be autumn. Because the weather is not that cold, most people still wear T-shirt.
Sep 19, 2021 12:02 PM
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Hi Jacy - Really great writing - Well done. I've done a couple of changes but I understood the meaning really well. There are four seasons in Taiwan — spring, summer, autumn and winter and each season has its own character. I love autumn the most, it’s chilly and cozy to wander around. September happens to be in autumn and because the weather is not that cold, most people still wear T-shirts. I've just moved to a new part of the world, so I am excited to see what the seasons are like here. I previously lived in England so I'm used to having lots of rain! Hope you're having a great day! Brad
Sep 19, 2021 7:02 PM
Please help me right. There are four seasons in Taiwan: spring, summer, autumn and winter . Each season has its own character, so people can feel it clearly. around and September becomes autumn.Because the weather isn't that cold, most of the people are still wearing t-shirts.
Sep 19, 2021 12:06 PM
There are four seasons in Taiwan — spring, summer, autumn and winter. Each season has something unique about it, so people can tell which season it is. (Keep in mind there are many different ways to say one thing in English, so this is just one way to express what you want to say.) I love autumn the most. (You don't need to say "to me", because starting the sentence with "I" already means you are referring to yourself. However, if you'd like, you can start the sentence with "personally" in this context. ) It’s chilly and cozy to wander around, and autumn happens to be in September. Because the weather is not that cold, most people still wear T-shirts.
Sep 21, 2021 1:23 AM
Please help me correct. There are four distinct seasons yearly in Taiwan, which are spring, summer, autumn and winter. Each season has its own special characteristics which make people feel differently. To me, I love autumn the most. It’s chilly and cool to wander around. This month September happens to be autumn. Since the weather is not too cold, most people still wear T-shirts.
Sep 19, 2021 12:31 PM
Please help me correct. There are four seasons in Taiwan — spring, summer, autumn and winter. Each season has its own characteristics so people can easily feel the difference. I love autumn the most. It’s chilly and cozy to wander around, and September happens to be the first month of autumn. Because the weather is not that cold, most people still wear T-shirts.
Sep 19, 2021 5:11 PM
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Jacy
Language Skills
Chinese (Mandarin), English
Learning Language
English