Nao
My daughter wrote a letter for the father's day ,“Thank you Dad for picking around money for my family.” She hadn't got concept of “work” at that time.  She wrote it when she was 4 years old. So, her sentece was very funny. But I don't know if I could discribe how much fun it was with my English. Her Japanese sentence made me imagine my husband was collecting money around neighbor like picking mushrooms. Could you please give me much better sentences discribing ‘Dad is picking money around’ image! (^^)Thank you!
Sep 21, 2021 1:57 PM
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My daughter wrote a letter for Father's Day, which said, “Thank you Dad for picking around money for my family.” She hadn't gotten the concept of “work” at that time. She wrote it when she was 4 years old. So, her sentence was very funny. But I don't know if I could describe how much fun it was with my English. Her Japanese sentence made me imagine my husband was collecting money around the neighbourhood like picking mushrooms. Could you please give me much better sentences describing ‘Dad is picking money around’ image! (^^)Thank you!
Hi Nao, you can say "Dad is collecting money around the neighbourhood just like we pick mushrooms." Anyway, I can help you improve your English. Please check out my teacher profile and feel free to book a lesson :)
Sep 23, 2021 6:01 AM
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Nao
Language Skills
English, Japanese, Korean, Spanish
Learning Language
English