Kseniia
Dear neighbours, My name is Kseniia T. and I live in the house number 24 at Rosewood Road as all of you. I am writing this letter to draw your attention to the problem, that have arisen recently. Everyday each of us use the entrance hall and you must have noticed inappropriate paintings and lettering on the wall, which had been done obviously non-residents of our community. First of all, I would like to suggest to install ССЕМ cameras to protect our property from vandals. Second of all, I guess, hiring a security guard could change this situation and allow us to feel safe. I believe, that we should make the appointment to discuss our proposals and exchange views. I sure, that the evening of 13th March would be convenient for everyone, because it is not a working day. Should you require further information, please do not hesitate to contact me. Yours sincerely, Kseniia T.
Feb 28, 2021 7:34 AM
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Dear neighbours, My name is Kseniia T. and I live in flat number 2 in this apartment block (you don't need to give the address because you all live in the same place) I am writing this letter to draw your attention to a problem that has arisen recently. Everyday, each of us uses the entrance hall (you could use the word 'vestibule' instead of entrance hall) and you must have noticed the inappropriate paintings and lettering (the word for this is 'grafitti') on the wall, which has obviously been done by non-residents of our community. First of all, I would like to suggest we install ССTV cameras to protect our property from vandals. Secondly (you can't say second of all) , I guess, hiring a security guard could change this situation and allow us to feel safer. I hope that we can arrange to hold a meeting to discuss these proposals and exchange views. Maybe the evening of 13th March would be convenient for everyone, because it is not a working day. Should you require any further information, please do not hesitate to contact me. Yours faithfully, Kseniia T.
Well done. You cover all the points and make sensible suggestions.
February 28, 2021
Dear neighbours, My name is Kseniia T. and I live in the house number 24 at Rosewood Road as all of you. I am writing this letter to draw your attention to the problem, that have arisen recently. Everyday each of us use the entrance hall and you must have noticed inappropriate paintings and lettering on the wall, which had been done obviously non-residents of our community. First of all, I would like to suggest to install ССЕМ cameras to protect our property from vandals. Second of all, I guess, hiring a security guard could change this situation and allow us to feel safe. I believe, that we should make the appointment to discuss our proposals and exchange views. I sure, that the evening of 13th March would be convenient for everyone, because it is not a working day. Should you require further information, please do not hesitate to contact me. Yours sincerely, Kseniia T.
It was prefect
February 28, 2021
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