Hello guys Today I got up early in morning. I and my friends went to the hill park. it's situated on high hill. We reached at the hill park before rising the sun. We captured photos there and when

rajaramesh kumarjaat

Hello guys Today I got up early in morning. I and my friends went to the hill park. it's situated on high hill. We reached at the hill park before rising the sun. We captured photos there and when Sun rised, we listen the birds' chirping. Sun rays ☀️ were making hill park beautiful and awesome. We enjoyed 4 four hours there . The whether was looking so amazing .

Mar 3, 2021 4:49 PM

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Hello guys! Today I got up early in the morning. My friends and I went to the park. It's situated on high hill. We reached the park before the sun came up. We captured photos there, and after sunrise, we listened to the birds' chirping. The sun ☀️ made the park beautiful and awesome. We enjoyed spending four hours there. The whether was amazing.

Great job! As an alternative, you could also say something like, "The park looked beautiful in the sunlight; it was awesome!" I was not sure what you meant by hill park. Is that the name if it? If so, capitalize it, like this: "Hill Park." In addition to "the sun came up," you could also say, "the sun rose." They have the same meaning.

March 4, 2021

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