I'm really exited because a new japanese restaurant is opened in my city. Well, I don't know if I could call it a restaurant properly, as it is to small and the tables are open air, but it looks very

Angie

I'm really exited because a new japanese restaurant is opened in my city. Well, I don't know if I could call it a restaurant properly, as it is to small and the tables are open air, but it looks very cool actually. I wanna take my sister and my cousin to there and try Ramen wich it's the specialty of that restaurant. Plus, I want to go there for my cousin's birthday, because I want to given him a surprise, as he likes the japanese culture and me too.

Mar 4, 2021 9:53 PM

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I'm really excited because a new Japanese restaurant has opened in my city. Well, I don't know if I could call it a restaurant, as it is too small and the tables are open air, but it looks very cool actually. I wanna take my sister and my cousin there and try Ramen which is the speciality of that restaurant. Plus, I want to go there as a birthday surprise for my cousin, as he likes japanese culture and so do I.

Very good Angie! You write well and clearly. Only a few small errors 💪 Soy profe de inglés y coach personal. Estoy aprendiendo inglés, hazmelo saber si interesaría un intercambio lingüístico 😁 I hope you go to the restaurant with your cousin and you have a great time!😊 and I wish you happiness and success on your journey of learning English!

March 4, 2021

I'm really exited because a new japanese restaurant has opened in my city. Well, I don't know if you could call it a proper restaurant, as it is too small and the tables are open air, but it looks very cool. I wanna take my sister and my cousin to there and try the Ramen, which is the specialty of that restaurant. Plus, I want to go there for my cousin's birthday, because I want to surprise him, as he likes japanese culture as well as me.

Great work!! Few small changes but nice informal piece of writing

March 4, 2021

I'm really excited because a new Japanese restaurant has opened in my city. Well, I don't know if I could call it a proper restaurant, as it is too small and the tables are open air, but it looks very cool actually. I wanna take my sister and my cousin there and try Ramen which is their specialty. Plus, I want to go there for my cousin's birthday, because I want to give him a surprise//because I want to surprise him, as he also likes Japanese culture.

March 4, 2021

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