Angie
I'm really exited because a new japanese restaurant is opened in my city. Well, I don't know if I could call it a restaurant properly, as it is to small and the tables are open air, but it looks very cool actually. I wanna take my sister and my cousin to there and try Ramen wich it's the specialty of that restaurant. Plus, I want to go there for my cousin's birthday, because I want to given him a surprise, as he likes the japanese culture and me too.
Mar 4, 2021 9:53 PM
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I'm really excited because a new Japanese restaurant has opened in my city. Well, I don't know if I could call it a restaurant, as it is too small and the tables are open air, but it looks very cool actually. I wanna take my sister and my cousin there and try Ramen which is the speciality of that restaurant. Plus, I want to go there as a birthday surprise for my cousin, as he likes japanese culture and so do I.
Very good Angie! You write well and clearly. Only a few small errors 💪 Soy profe de inglés y coach personal. Estoy aprendiendo inglés, hazmelo saber si interesaría un intercambio lingüístico 😁 I hope you go to the restaurant with your cousin and you have a great time!😊 and I wish you happiness and success on your journey of learning English!
Mar 4, 2021 10:16 PM
I'm really exited because a new japanese restaurant has opened in my city. Well, I don't know if you could call it a proper restaurant, as it is too small and the tables are open air, but it looks very cool. I wanna take my sister and my cousin to there and try the Ramen, which is the specialty of that restaurant. Plus, I want to go there for my cousin's birthday, because I want to surprise him, as he likes japanese culture as well as me.
Great work!! Few small changes but nice informal piece of writing
Mar 4, 2021 10:31 PM
I'm really excited because a new Japanese restaurant has opened in my city. Well, I don't know if I could call it a proper restaurant, as it is too small and the tables are open air, but it looks very cool actually. I wanna take my sister and my cousin there and try Ramen which is their specialty. Plus, I want to go there for my cousin's birthday, because I want to give him a surprise//because I want to surprise him, as he also likes Japanese culture.
Mar 4, 2021 10:13 PM
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Angie
Language Skills
English, French, Spanish
Learning Language
English, French