I have visited umpteen places in my life, including Rashikash, Haridwar, Shimla etc. My last trip was to Udiapur. I had no plans to go here. I saw it for the first time in my life (better: It was my first time there OR I had never been there before)..My friend had to go there for business. He suggested I go with him. I was very excited to go there. We went by plane (We flew there) .He stayed with an office colleague. I booked a hotel. Then, I started to go here and there.
there were tiny stalls for eating food near my hotel. (better: There were tiny food stalls near my hotel). The food was delicious. I tried pau bhaji and potato prantha. After that, I went to Sagar lake which was situated in a beautiful place. The lake was bordered (was surrounded) by mountains. There were many gardens which were amazing for families, ,kids and couples. You could also ride bicycles there (you could also get around by bicycle). I rented a bicycle and also roamed around there. It was a fantastic place .If you can go upside (?unclear) then you can see the full serency (? serenity? scenery?) of Udipur. The most fascinating factor is that there were a lot of temples and amazing places and local markets such as city place, Babu market, jagdish temples and also gardens. If you reach babu market, you can visit a lot of places You have no need to hire a cab or rent a car again and again. Therefore it is fantastic place, and you will not be bored there. I want to explain more.??? If you visit, you will know (discover) more and more about it. In the end I can say that when I remember it (better: when I think of this place) it refreshes my mind. You should visit more places (the rest was unclear).Thanks
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