Camilo
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As usual you have to avoid eating excess fat in your meals, you can exercise in the parks and in the city, you can also exercise at home, although I consider it boring to exercise at home.
Feb 18, 2022 3:24 PM
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As usual, you should avoid eating excess fat in your meals. You can exercise in the parks and in the city. You can also exercise at home, although I consider it boring to exercise at home.
I think using “should” sounds more fluent and like a native speaker :)
Feb 19, 2022 6:42 AM
As usual, you have to avoid eating excess fat in your meals. You can exercise in the parks and in the city. You can also exercise at home, although I consider it boring to exercise at home.
This is all great! I’ve added some punctuation ideas to structure the paragraph better.
Feb 18, 2022 4:18 PM
Hi Camilo, this seems fine. What did you want help with?
Feb 18, 2022 4:17 PM
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