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I translated a part of Korean news into Korea. Would anyone mind correcting it? Studies have shown that eating with others can increase feelings of well-being. Because people feel intimacy and promote bonding when they sit together around the table. Another study shows that when children and adolescents eat with others, they are more likely to eat healthy foods like fruits, vegetables. There is even evidence that eating with family reduces the chances of young people becoming overweight or obese.
Feb 19, 2022 7:43 AM
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Researches have shown that eating together can increase one's sense of well-being or increase feelings of well-being because When people sit around a table, they feel intimacy and bond together. Another research shows that when children and adolescents eat with together,They are more inclined to eat healthy foods such as fruits and vegetables. There is even evidence that eating with a family reduces the risk of overweight or obesity in young people.Hi, I'm Kim. I'm Korean, but I live and was born in the U.S., so I'm a native English speaker.While you search for an English native speaker, I search for a Korean native speaker.We might be able to help each other. I followed you. Could you send me a text?
Feb 20, 2022 10:59 AM
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