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My boss is kind of bossy and condescending. Last afternoon I sent him messages on WeChat of Working, telling that if I can come tomorrow and talk with you about the new Saas system, and he replied me, 'do you have anything to be confirmed with me.' I said yes, that since you mentioned you would want an administrator in that system, your personal information is needed in order to accomplish register. But guess what, my boss, as irresponsible as I assume, simply replied one word to me, OH being his answer. I was unhappy to see this sort of answer, so I sent him what kind of information would be needed, such as your ID card number and phone number. To be expected, he didn't reply. I have no idea and impatiently told him if I could come to him and talk about it tomorrow. He agreed by simply saying yes. Later that night, I sent the contract file to him and asked if we need to let our company's lawyer check out the contract. Because he didn't send me any his information, the contract was not filled. He didn't realize it was all his bad, and moreover using a likely accusing tone told me, ' It's all empty.' I could not resist my anger anymore, so I counter asked him, ' You didn't give me your information so how could their company sign this contract.' From this experience, I got to know what kind of person my boss is, so foolish and irresponsible. Could someone give me some suggestions about my writing? Thanks!
Feb 20, 2022 5:25 AM
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My boss is kind of bossy and condescending. Yesterday afternoon I sent him messages on WeChat , asking whether I could come tomorrow and discuss the new Saas system, and he replied , 'Do you have anything to be confirmed with me.' I said yes, that since you mentioned you would want an administrator in that system, your personal information is needed in order to register. But guess what, my boss, as irresponsible as I assume, simply replied? 'Oh'. I was unhappy to see this sort of answer, so I asked him what kind of information would be needed, such as your ID number and phone number. To be expected, he didn't reply. I have no idea why and impatiently asked him if I could meet him and talk about it tomorrow. He agreed by simply saying 'Yes'. Later last night, I sent the contract file to him and asked if we needed to have our company's lawyer check out the contract. Because he didn't send me any of his information, the contract was not completed. He didn't realize it was all his fault, and moreover used an accusing tone and told me, ' It's all empty/It's not complete.' I could not resist my anger anymore, so I replied, ' You didn't give me your information so how could their company sign this contract.' From this experience, I got to know what kind of person my boss is, so foolish and irresponsible. Could someone give me some suggestions about my writing? Thanks!
Feb 20, 2022 7:18 AM
My boss is kind of bossy and condescending. Yesterday afternoon, I sent him messages on WeChat regarding our work. I asked/told him that if I could come to his place(/office) tomorrow and talk with him about the new Saas system, and he replied to me: 'Do you have anything to be confirmed with me?' I said: 'Yes, that since you mentioned you would want an administrator in that system, your personal information is needed in order to accomplish the registration." But guess what, my boss, as irresponsible as he is I assumed, simply replied one word to me: "OH!" was his answer. I was unhappy to see this sort of answer, so I sent him what kind of information would be needed, such as your ID card number and phone number. To be expected, he didn't reply. I have no idea and impatiently told him if I could come to him and talk about it tomorrow. He agreed by simply saying yes. Later that night, I sent the contract file to him and asked if we need to let our company's lawyer check out the contract. Because he didn't send me any his information, the contract was not filled. He didn't realize it was all his bad, and moreover using a likely accusing tone told me, ' It's all empty.' I could not resist my anger anymore, so I counter asked him, ' You didn't give me your information so how could their company sign this contract.' From this experience, I got to know what kind of person my boss is, so foolish and irresponsible. Could someone give me some suggestions about my writing? Thanks!
Feb 20, 2022 6:49 AM
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