Dario
Hi everyone =) Can you tell me if this sentence works good in English? And suggest to me some modifications if they are necessary? Thank you =) "Similarly, also pressure force (Fp) increases with the decreasing D value. Since the pressure force acting on the releasing mass is related to the pressure difference acting on its two bases, a possible explanation for this trend, can be find out looking at pressure drops in the different regions"
Mar 2, 2021 3:45 PM
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"trend can be found looking..." Otherwise I think the English is good. It is a very complex sentence and I cannot make more corrections without more context.
March 2, 2021
Scientific language can be difficult even for (non-scientific) natives. In addition to Brian's correction, I have a couple of thoughts: SIMILARLY, ALSO choose one (probably SIMILARLY) - - don't use both. For pressure force and D value, decide whether they should have an article (THE) in front of them, then be consistent.
March 3, 2021
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